by Beautiful Soul
I can really relate to this poem well. It's really difficult when you feel like no one can hear your screams inside or out. I loved the use of eyes here too. Eyes canreally see into a soul and really tell the real story whether it be witj tears or hhappiness. The wording in the third stanza is wonderful because you start to say how you really are feeling. When you feel sadness or pain we all scream on the inside and the only person who can hear it is you. And when you hear nothing for a long time it gets very tiring. The last stanxa is very powerful. :). No one can hear or see what you are feeling and it seems like it has been happening all this person's life. Great write. |
I really enjoyed this piece because at this time in my life, I can really relate to the feeling of being misunderstood and having no one to listen, feeling invisible and eventually silence becoming a normal routine. |
I guess if more people take the time and truly listen there would be less misunderstanding. There is a big difference between listening and hearing what we are saying. And that is the reason why we keep it to ourselves. Great write |