Holy crap, Your poetry is amazing.

I love this poem
You are an amazing writer

Well written

And again!

I normally do not read poems which have this type of layout, and I honestly cannot tell you why. I am asking myself why I judge the poem on looks, but I guess I am not judging, there is just something in my mind which feels it will be hard work to read, or break down, when in fact, it is not hard at all.

This tone and theme is totally different to that of the poem I just read, but wow, the power is just the same.

Your wording and metaphors are great, consistent throughout and keep the flow of the poem going. You offer ideas which help really create that mood, that point, picturing the scene you are writing about.

You have a beautiful gift for poetry, perhaps layout is something you can work on, or experiment with?

I am glad I came across these poems.