Waiting for you... Mom

Wow, this hit home! I know how i felt when my mom never was there for me when i was younger. I still remember the day Social Services came and took me away from my mom. Amazing job! Keep it up!

*~BrittBratt~*

This is sad and heartbreaking...thank you for sharing this with us..
well done ..keep writing! I believe you have that power to move people's heart.. :)

Coming from a terrible relationship with my mother, I can relate to this. I know the pain of rejection that comes from the one person who is supposed to love you unconditionally. Keep strong and know that others love you and let them be your strong point.

You never where there

^ suggestion for this line is to say instead:

you were never there

it reads better, at least in my opinion

Also in this line:

Each day i wake up, wishing you're here

^ I think it would read better if you said: wishing you were here.

Other than that, I can feel the sadness in this piece. It's well written. A mom's love and attention is always needed. Well done.