by Everlasting Mar 17, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
It's fine |
by Meena Krish
Looks like you have written a loop poetry making each one unravel like a yarn, unravelling your thoughts...good job! |
by LittleMsPink
Well written c: |
by Jyoti Rawat
Excellent work , |
by earlgreytea
Any time. :) |
by earlgreytea
I love the structure and wording in this poem, the thoughts all seem to melt together, all connected, interlocked. It was an amazing read, there isn't alot of poetry that really stands out, but yours does. Loved it!!! :) |
by Everlasting
Thank you so much!! |