"Do I dare give in and hope that I may catch myself before I fall too far?"
I really like this line.
and your writing.
keep it up.

Again, another beautifully worded, descriptive writing! You have so much talent I am going to add you to my favorites, so keep them coming! :-) -Jay

Beautifully written,
your choice of title is well done as well, it really captured my attention. i really like this one :) 5/5