I like it. I can picture a clear starry imagery to this. |
by Jay
I enjoyed this! I could read the feeling being expressed! I unbuttoned either it being about a lover or even a child. Very beautifully written with a really good flow! I can't critique it bc there is nothing I'd change! Thank you for sharing :-) -Jay 5/5 |
by LittleMsPink
Lol yeah, sharp eye, though i think its quite noticeable, i still thought no one would notice that, i wrote this poem thinking about two things and it was either a lover and a child :) |
by Marvellous
Love exercised, commands healing. Quite an incredible attempt! |
I figured this write was about a parent or guardian, a family member. Such a beautiful deceleration of love and longevity, I hope the person who receive this was happy. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Excellent Little Ms Pink! As a Minister I love anything that exalts our Lord Jesus! |