Comments : My Savior, My Love

  • 10 years ago

    by Postguied Parnell

    I like it. I can picture a clear starry imagery to this.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jay

    I enjoyed this! I could read the feeling being expressed! I unbuttoned either it being about a lover or even a child. Very beautifully written with a really good flow! I can't critique it bc there is nothing I'd change! Thank you for sharing :-) -Jay 5/5

    • 10 years ago

      by LittleMsPink

      Lol yeah, sharp eye, though i think its quite noticeable, i still thought no one would notice that, i wrote this poem thinking about two things and it was either a lover and a child :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Love exercised, commands healing. Quite an incredible attempt!

  • 10 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    I figured this write was about a parent or guardian, a family member. Such a beautiful deceleration of love and longevity, I hope the person who receive this was happy.

    5/5

    Dean.E

  • 10 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Excellent Little Ms Pink! As a Minister I love anything that exalts our Lord Jesus!
    You definitely have Talent, not liking the slang one with the "F" word.
    I will add your poem and you to my favorites.
    Ken gracefaithgift.com