This poem makes me feel like hyperventilating for some reason. In the best way possible because it was and is an amazing poem. Great job, it was a lovely read. :)

Of course I am. :)

I absolutely adore this. This is great! You took my pointers and it bloody well worked out! I love it. It's smooth, it flows and I love the repetition of the pale blue light - it really sets the scene.

A nice, sweet poem; good job :)

This poem seems so simple when you first look at it, then you get to reading it, and suddenly, there is a much deeper meaning. This is a really good poem! Keep writing!

Nice poem, I love the fact that it was short and straight to the point.

Nicely written, very tight with a good rhyming scheme.

I like how this poem conjures images as you read and I especially enjoy how this can be read at only lightning pace.

great job.

Its not something most teens dont feel expecially after an abusive life