Numb

by Misundertood   Mar 19, 2014


Can't feel my fingers
can't feel my toes
can't feel my cheeks
can't feel my nose

things have all started
anything goes
can't feel my fingers
can't feel my toes

everything creeks
and everything slows
can't feel my cheeks
can't feel mt nose

just one more cut
nobody knows
can't feel my fingers
can't feel my toes

every things black
my body seeps
I can't go back
I'll look like i'm asleep
no don't cry
no don't weep
I'll be watching
you forever asleep

J.out

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  • 10 years ago

    by Smaccams

    Very strong feelings and emotion in this one. I love your use of repetition with the simple phrases from the first stanza. Captures the feeling of numbness throughout the body entirely!

    Lovely but sad poem. Good job; I'm always here if you need to talk! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    I will be here for you babe :)

  • 10 years ago

    by DontWorryAboutMe

    I really like this. It speaks to me a lot. I'm here if you wanna talk..

  • 10 years ago

    by misty lott

    Its not bad that you cute its just a way to cope with things in life

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    We're here for you. We being me and a lot of other people on this sight I'm sure. Keep your head up. :)

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