by Jack Nightengale Mar 20, 2014
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Falling from the sky, |
by Trinity Heart
On the part where it said "Monsters devour the wings and rip through the skin," my "wings" winced in pain great poem great flow 5/5 |
by JaM
This a great write! I really enjoyed your rhyming and imagery. I also like the dark feelings of it; even one so great, can still fall so far from the light. |
Wow Bro! I love the depth that you go into with your writings and this is one of the deepest ones that I've read from you so far. It seems like your dark poetry gets even darker. Keep it up bro, great job |
by Burning Angel
I love this poem! It is dark and the depth of the poem is flawless! |
by Misundertood
Dark and deep man keep up the good work man exceptional work |