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  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    I get the feeling the spelling of "lye's" might be intentional but I could be wrong. Amazing poem nonetheless, keep up the amazing work. :)

    • 10 years ago

      by JaM

      Thank you, and it is, but only because that's how I was corrected. I hate to admit that sometimes the apostrophe confuses me with s's. Now that I've looked it up as well, I'm not sure it's right, any suggestions?

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Hmm...now you have me thinking. lays? maybe lies. I'm 82% sure it is lies. Maybe. ;)

    • 10 years ago

      by JaM

      Well to lye is the plural of lay, and lies I understood to be "fibs" so indeed, ponder that and let me know :P

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Luededed. For sure.