Dreams

by Jyoti Rawat   Mar 20, 2014


Let fly with your dreams,
don't try to stop them.
Because free birds always
Make their homes

Udhne dho sapno ko
Mat bando unko,
Kyo ki aajad panchhi apna,
Ghosla bana lete hai,

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  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was a beautiful little poem, quite uplifting and inspiring, teaching us to let go of our past, hold on to our dreams and flight for them. Because only when we are free, can we become at peace and truly live.

    I think the birds making new homes, relates to when we start our new lives, and homes, when we let go of the past, and are then able to make our future.

    nice job.

    • 10 years ago

      by Jyoti Rawat

      U describe here very nice meaning my poem.
      Thanks

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Now that is a beautiful message for any heart that reads it! Excellent!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Good poem but few more lines will better..
    i like the comparison of birds.

    • 10 years ago

      by Jyoti Rawat

      Hmmmmmm

      few words are enough to explain for me.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    ~Very dreamy. Nice imagery Jyoti.

    Looking for more lines :-) 5/5!

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