Comments : Wasted

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Valid point, brings to focus the fragility of life, Great job, :) 5/5

    • 10 years ago

      by Misundertood

      Ha thanks just thought it should be said out loud so some people know how precious it is ya know?

  • 10 years ago

    by misty lott

    True we waste are time listening to our parents

  • 10 years ago

    by Smaccams

    Love the first stanza; it reads at a really fast and comfortable pace! :) Great poem overall as well, with quite a good point! - to not waste the precious time we all have left.

    Well done!