My hell

Really like the poem . you conveyed your pain very well . I like the description you used

Wow this is very powerful my friend. I loved so much how you started this because you seem to say that you died when your love died. And though you hold memories in your heart they hurt more then help you cope. The second stanza does wrap up the poem well :). Though there is so much sadness in it. Overall this is a very beautiful poem.

This is such a strong poem, showing that hell when someone has hurt you, hurt you so deep that you feel they killed a part of you, perhaps your soul, your heart, your faith. But at the same time, they are probably the same person to keep you live, because you cannot help but love them anyway, and hold onto the love that maybe was there at the beginning, or maybe it was never there, but you wanted it to be, and still hope for it to be.

I also like the idea of promises cheating you, rather than the person themselves.

Nice work

That is why they say love is blind. Knowing you have already been hurt once yet willing to go through it again cause that love for the person makes you blind, touching yet it shows the hopefulness in the writer.

I really enjoyed reading this poem!