Make wise choices

by Rsan   Mar 21, 2014


The world you pretend living
Is like no other,than a black mist
Just obscuring you from
Reality and everything amidst
To extremity

The thoughts you try to entangle
Aren't really yours
Just voices spoken by the dark brethren
To lure your soul to endure
Everlasting torture

The ones who are close to you
Friends,allies, foes
May all seem but nice
Turn your back,obloquy
All hypocrites

The fates and deaths others meet
All just depict to you
How just a single choice or act
Might condemn you,an impact
Choose wisely

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Rsan,

    Real great piece here and as a reader we can connect,

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Rsan

      Thanks

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A great piece drenched in wisdom. Well done.

    • 9 years ago

      by Rsan

      Thanks

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A great piece drenched in wisdom. Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    Nicely pen'ed.

    • 10 years ago

      by Rsan

      Thanks Bonaventure..

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is a really amazing poem and the flow of everything is really great. I love the connection that the reader can have to the poem

    • 10 years ago

      by Rsan

      Thanks for taking your time to read it..And for giving your thoughts about it
      I appreciate it:-)

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