Very true and Amen to that |
by Meme
Yes it is! |
by Maple Tree
Your Tankas really speak volumes Meme! It does take two... letting go is so painful and you have etched those feelings nicely within this poem and form sweet one! |
by Baby Rainbow
Oh Meme, this is so true and powerful. You have done so well to fit this really touching message inside a small formed poem such as the Tanka. Well done. |
by Meme
Thank you ladies for the nice comments :) |
by Beautiful Soul
I truly loved this poem for it is very true. When you dont feel love anymore you know it. I truly loved the way you worded this though. It's not cliche at all. *retreat from memories* is a very unique line!. This is like a note to the one you once loved. Anyway. Your tankas always blow me away because you have such away to impact the meaning with such few lines. Beautiful |