I really enjoyed the poem for the sheer fact that people go through this a lot. It is a bit different though. It seems like you have twisted this around and made a double view point so to speak. Though you are the one who hurt it seems like you are or were happy too. I think what you are saying is that you want to both be happy and even though you fell in love with this person you only want to if they were happy as well. It's very difficult when you believe they love you and then break your heart. Very well written

Whaoo! I love every single
line in this poem... U've
got talent! Keep it up!

I related to this, I could feel the pain and the insecurity inside the poem. That moment when you like someone, perhaps even trust them, but inside you are scared they will leave, just like everyone else has seemed to do in your past.

You need to capitalize your I throughout the poem, including the one in the title too.

Also, I would like to see you try and play around with this title, and see if you can make a smaller one, but holding the same impact or meaning that your poem has, I am sure you could do this. Titles are a big thing on this site, and is mainly what attracts people to your poems. It can also be quite fun seeing what different titles you can put to a poem.

good job on this one girl, keep it up.

Nicely done! This is something that everyone male and female go through. Everyone at one point experiences the sting of rejection and break ups whether it's friends or family it all feels the same. A simple poem full of meaning are usually the best to read.

Touching!! great poem.

Personally I like the title. Not only that but I think anyone who has been in a relationship can relate. I think you did a great job of putting it all out there.
Good job!

Thank you for writing this. Very well written.

This is very relatable and beautifully expressed.