There you go, this sounds smoother than other of your writings. I like it, specially this part:

"You were the high school parties I never attended, the drinks that never pierced my thoughts, my morals, my inhibitions- everything I owned became hypnotized by your brash pigments. "

This poem has this haunting atmosphere, but it pulls the reader in. It's somehow mysterious as I'm unsure to whom you are talking to. However, I can try to figure that on my own.

I love how mysterious this was, but how the words create an imagery that disturbs, causing you to think, and wonder. Its haunting, chilling but exciting and I really lie that.
Always love reading your poetry MaryAnne.
xxx

This poem is different from all your others and I enjoyed reading