Wow there is so much to this piece. It is so well written but so completely heartrending at the same time. There is wisdom and there is curiousity as well, meshed almost perfectly together. I love the way you went about getting your feelings out and your thoughts to a specific point.

I do not; however, have the ability to say that I like the style you chose, it sort of distracts the reader from what you are trying to say.

Thank you. I realize that the style is a bit different from most of my poems. Do you have any idea of one that would be better suited?