Comments : Home is Where the Heart is...

  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Beautiful poem!
    The rhyming was right on.
    The opening really caught me...

    Is home still where the
    heart is,
    when it seems so far away?

    I relate to this and can answer it with a yes, being in a long distance relationship I know where my home lies, with her. Beautiful description..

    I enjoyed how you asked a question after each stanza like you are trying to find the answers or see what others may feel and think when it comes to love.

    The ending really was strong..

    If home is where the
    heart is, then my home
    is still with you.

    Because this is so true with love. You did a fabulous job.

    • 10 years ago

      by Court

      Thank you very much. And long distance relationships are hard, I wish you better luck than I had.