Comments : The Vase Atop the Roof - [ Shakespearean Sonnet ]

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the opening lines, it has a nice gentle touch to it. I could picture a maiden taking care of her garden with love making all the flowers bloom in joy.

    I like this sonnet and you did a good job with the rhymes and the last two lines for me, was like an inspiration...well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Beautiful