This is really sad, i had a good time reading this, 5

Great poem,
The last stanza is amazing
and really ends the poem well

"And let hollow night winds fill the void
Of air that I displace."

Sad and beautiful

Good show.

Hmm, it definetly states emotion but what might be the cause?

Deffinately liked this! Could relate and felt the emotion in this.

~AloneNHurt

I really like the last six lines the best, but the whole thing was good to read. I give it 5/5 for sure. Great job.

Thank you redxii!!! XD

This poem does not miss a beat and reflects feelings hidden in the chambers of my heart

I normally just post my own stuff up here and not read others (d move, I know, but this is my way of venting), but the title of this poem caught my eye. The title may have caught my eye, but the last stanza caught my full attention. It's perfectly round and sums up a whole bunch of things personal to me - it's spherical. If you've seen the movie Sphere, you'll get this: 'I bet you could put a laser micrometer on this thing - you'll find that it's a perfect sphere".