Inside Her

by Karla   Mar 30, 2014


Inside her

there is an altar in her chest
where she worships language
as she tries to escape the flux.
don't tell her about lucidity
or trivia. she is beyond words,
capturing the spirit of poetry.

Karla Bardanza
http://karlabardanzapoems.blogspot.com
http://skycladatmidnight.tumblr.com
http://poeticpostcards.blogspot.com

For Baby Rainbow's contest - 6 lines

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  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Excellent ,as always !!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like your style and I like how it brings out images which just runs deep. Nice one!

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love how unique this is and how your descriptions come off as bizarre but put together create a really, truly remarkable piece. I like the way your voice comes through the piece and says more than the words otherwise would on their own. I wish I had seen this while I could still vote for it because really this is so beautiful and so simple and so completely wonderful. Very well penned.

  • 10 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You can express your emotions so well and turn it in to an excellent poem. So well penned and great title

  • 10 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    I have to read this over and over, like a good tune it catches my soul