by redxiii
Even though there's a gender difference I know that feeling. Especially the tears not from pain. Sadness or relief but not pain. Pain is the least of the evils. |
by NiXiT
I really enjoy your darker poetry the most. A lot of emotion and the flow comes across really well. I look forward to more pieces like this, it is wonderful. |
by Trinity Heart
In some places it didn't flow but that aside the message wad beautiful and powerful to put a punch in the end so that covered the nonflow of the poem quite well 5/5 |
by Fenix Flight
That first stanza I can truly relate too. This poem is very well written. I love the raw emotions that are throughout it. |
by Joe Davila
Thats deep. Kind of how I feel... |
by favi
Woww! Amazing i felt every emotion to this poem as well your a good writer keep up the good work |
This is well written. It gets more sorrowful as you read each stanza and you got the perfect ending. Good job! |