Comments : In Her Eyes

  • 10 years ago

    by redxiii

    Even though there's a gender difference I know that feeling. Especially the tears not from pain. Sadness or relief but not pain. Pain is the least of the evils.

  • 10 years ago

    by NiXiT

    I really enjoy your darker poetry the most. A lot of emotion and the flow comes across really well. I look forward to more pieces like this, it is wonderful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    In some places it didn't flow but that aside the message wad beautiful and powerful to put a punch in the end so that covered the nonflow of the poem quite well 5/5

    -Onyx

  • 10 years ago

    by Fenix Flight

    That first stanza I can truly relate too. This poem is very well written. I love the raw emotions that are throughout it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Joe Davila

    Thats deep. Kind of how I feel...

  • 10 years ago

    by favi

    Woww! Amazing i felt every emotion to this poem as well your a good writer keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    This is well written. It gets more sorrowful as you read each stanza and you got the perfect ending. Good job!

    Life is wonderful if you'll try to see the beauty in it. Cheers!!! God bless you!