by Baby Rainbow Apr 1, 2014
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Misty autumn trees |
by Beautiful Soul
It warms my heart to always see an imagery poem. The first line I can see a forest or the woods and a person walking down a path. Many tells me there is nothing but trees and autumn tells me that there are beautiful leaves all around you. The second line is justas bbeautiful and it connects so well with the first. Morning sky could mean a lot as well. It could be the sun is just coming up and the breath of chill is in the air. The sun is just peaking out behind those trees. I loved how you used the hands of the woods. That tells me the braches are luscious and full. This is a great haiku overall saffie because you took a moment in time and placed the reader there with you. Beautiful! ! |