by Baby Rainbow Apr 1, 2014
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Raindrops in April |
by Beautiful Soul
Here in the first line- I love how you incorporate the month it is now and that is present tense which is perfect in a haiku. I can see the rain falling down the sky. I truly loved the imagery here again. I can see the midnight sky and the stars that make the rain shine. The third line does a great great job wrapping up the poem well. Sonetimes life at night is better because you can hear the quiet. You can hear therain on the roof or the window. Anyways you did another great job using the restrictions to do an imagery poem. Beautiful work |