Comments : Natural Peace (haiku)

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Again I loved how all the lines connected so well and I can imagine here a person meditating in the woods and in their favorite spot beneath the sun. Again I loved Autumn leaves because it brings such a great picture to tje scene as a whole. The second line is good too. It's like the woods holds a secret that only certain people can understand. I think you seemed to make the leaves or the woods a person and gave them a personality of sorts. The only emotions they feel are peace. This is a great poem because you again take one scene and make it a strong poem