Comments : Maple Tree (haiku)

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Maple leaves are so beautiful. And this imagery is very beautiful. One of my favorite from you honestly. Here I can see the woods and the wind blowing all the trees around. My little suggestion is in the second line you could say "with" instead of " like". Just my opinion. Anyways the last line is perfect to me. It tells methat there is a mystery to the woods. The lines connect so well here. :) another beautiful one

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    So very beautiful!!!!!!