Bumblebees (haiku)

by Baby Rainbow   Apr 1, 2014


Buzzing bumblebees
get to work inside their hive,
creating honey.

Saffie
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1/4/2014

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  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I always love the sound a bumblebee makes because you just know it's a bee. The wording here is fantastic. The simplicity of it but the imagery as well. You are doing a great job making one scene and making it connect. I can imagery that you are the bumblebee and you are working all day long making honey. Anyways. As I said with all of your haikus you are doing a great job with the imagery. Well done!