by Beautiful Soul
This one is very interesting to me. Because the imagery is actually fantastic. And the wording is great. Okay. The first stanza shows me a bluebird (although simple the use of a certain colour makes it stand out more its great for this). I really like the clouds part to contrast the birds. Because I see the sky as light blue and usually birds are darker shades so the contrast there too makes you see them clearly. There is sooo much I can say about the last two stanzas. Anyways. |