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by Everlasting Apr 4, 2014 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
I'm the ocean. I'm the ocean! And you are, a castaway. In me, you'll drown in. Soon. Soon. You said, I'm the ocean, I'm the ocean! Alas, do not resist. I say, Sure, You are the ocean. You are the ocean. And I'm, a castaway. But he... he is my life jacket. He saves me from sinking in your shallow depths.Written by: Lucero L. For Saffie's Contest.
by Jyoti Rawat
Nice said. Ending is correct.