Meadowlarks (haiku)

by Baby Rainbow   Apr 4, 2014


Moonlit meadowlarks
shimmer calmly in the trees:
breathing summer air

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  • 10 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is a cute little write

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This one really made me smile because I had forgottenwhat a meadowlark was. And bbecause I lovebirds this one touched my heart. Well the imagery again here is stunning. Since you said moonlit I can see the moon as bright as can be on a warm summer night. The sky is clear and stars shimmer. Hmmm it's a bit confusing now.

    You say moonlit but in the second stanza you say "sun". So I would say change one of.them to fit the other. Either day or night time. Anyways.

    I loved how you incorporate summer because that's where are the birds come to life. This is a very cute little poem. Just look at the small error.