The imagery here is fantastic. It's very hard to put such a strong message inside a haiku but you have done it here. In the first line I see swans relaxing in the ocean. That tells me more about the imagery because I can see it being a beautiful sunny day out with no clouds and the water being clear. The second line connects well with the first because they are now flying away as one flock. Which tells me they could be a family of swans and they are very close with each other. The last line is where the strong message comes in. The world nowadays nobody is really close with each other. And animals are. We can learn to love each other more often. Anyways. This poem is fantastic. :) well done

I love swans and they stick together.
They are this big family and always stay close by. We indeed can learn something from them.