Dark Thoughts
by Lilninja Apr 4, 2014
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You think you know me but you don't everything inside feels like it's turning to dark. I try my best to be so good, but what it all keeps coming back to is all these dark thoughts inside my head. I can't run I can't hide it just keeps chasing me in my mind, these thought are burning black I cannot lie its killing me inside. Why so evil, why so scary, can it be? Am I really this bad? These images I see, I don't understand is it something I want or am I afraid? You say I'm good, you say I'm ok, but yet these dark thoughts aren't running away, I think I may need help someday, if I'm really this bad I'll have to go away. I'll try my best to be so good that way maybe this was all just misunderstood. The worst thing of being afraid is letting your mind go wild so just maybe I'm not so bad after all. |
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10 years ago
by Lilninja
Thanks! yeah i really didnt break it up like i should i was just finished with it and posted it i think i get too excited when i feel almost done writing. I appreciate the tips.
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10 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
Your words have potential, but the layout is too off-putting to readers.
I suggest you take some time to put it in some stanzas, verses, break it up a little, and more people will be able to read it.
The poems have to be quite appealing to the eye, your work deserves to be read.
