Winter Melts (haiku)

The first line tells me that winter is still lingering around and there is still a little ice on the water. I loved how you used spring in the deeper message of the second stanza, as it gets warmer and warmer the water will start to become more clear. I liked the use of hills too, it makes for the use of beautiful imagery. Because when you think of hills you think of a sunset or sun rise over the water or a beach even. And the closer we come to spring and summer the more the Sun's kiss will be known. Anyway this is a beautiful imagery poem as you can clearly see what you are trying to say and I think a lot of people have done this. The title is perfect for right now too.