by Beautiful Soul
There is so much you can say about this one too! First of all the title is perfect to me because in the poem you are talking about the subject of the flower. Amyway. The use of young is great because thst tells me the flower is just blooming after wilting because of the winter cold. I loved the wording you used in the first two lines because flowers are very gentle and the use of "young" and "softly" connect well to the gentleness of the flower and poem overall. As I said I see this flower just blooming and coming to life. So that tells me that spring is here and your last line proves this to be true. Anyways. The lines connect so well as a story. Well done |
by Hellon
Young lotus blossom |
I love it |
by Maple Tree
Beautiful Haiku by Baby Rainbow!!! |