Night Owl (haiku)

by Baby Rainbow   Apr 6, 2014


Midnight visitor
rests upon a willow tree;
eyes as bright as stars

Saffie
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  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Wow, Saffie.. I LOVE this. I adore Owls so much! They are such majestic creatures!

    You definitely done the Haiku justice here, it's perfect. You described an owl perching on a willow tree at midnight, something that is beautiful enough... but when the owl looks your way, you see it's gorgeous bright eyes! Maybe their eyes reflecting from a street lamp or a porch light...either way, stunning image!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very visual and descriptive. I like how you have included the season, time and nature into this..nicely penned.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    There is some interpretations
    nice written..

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this. It is so short but just the emotion you have behind the poem makes it so beautiful!

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    Perfect! Saff, you did an excellent job writing this! This is just amazing! Good job! Keep writing :)