Oh my goodness, this poem is so perfect. You have put amazing flow into this, and the wording is great. It's only downfall is the punctuation, you need to break it up so that the reader's can clearly see where to stop, and hold the smaller images in their mind.

I adore the tone of the poem, so hopeful and confident that this love will be one day. I like the repetition also, it works really well.

Little editing of the punctuation and it would be an amazing poem for anyone to read!

Well done. Love the title choice too.