Comments : No Expectations (haiku)

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This haiku has a very free, serene feeling to it... like a laid back summer day. The willow trees swaying in the breeze along with the visiting fairies! I love that mystical touch, although it makes me wonder if the fairies is a metaphor for something else, like lightning bugs or butterflies... or even children that come to play beneath the trees!

    Lovely piece!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This one does create a magical picture and at the same time there is a peacefulness within it. Nicely penned.