by Baby Rainbow Apr 9, 2014
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Shy silver moonbeam |
Such a beautiful poem. The last line was so simple yet was such a strong finish, people need this kind of inspiration |
by Meena Krish
When the moment is given every person shines from within. No matter the darkness or the sadness the shine in them never looses only confidence will grow. Excellent choice of words to |
by BlueJay
I really like the innocence in this piece. The short limiting form drives me insane so I love how you were able to pen something so vivid, so beautiful. Great job. |
I see how this poem could be interpreted to be a metaphorical poem, however I don't really think it is. I think it's rather simple and stunning in that way that it can be personified as well as a simple nature poem, too. |
A lot of emotions in a few lines. Enjoyed reading |