Midnight Mirror (haiku)

by Baby Rainbow   Apr 9, 2014


Shy silver moonbeam
reflecting upon the sea;
confidence building

Saffie
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9/4/14

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  • 10 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Such a beautiful poem. The last line was so simple yet was such a strong finish, people need this kind of inspiration

    Great poem saffs

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    When the moment is given every person shines from within. No matter the darkness or the sadness the shine in them never looses only confidence will grow. Excellent choice of words to
    convey a message using nature.

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like the innocence in this piece. The short limiting form drives me insane so I love how you were able to pen something so vivid, so beautiful. Great job.

    I think my favorite part about this is how you said one thing and yet anyone that reads it will read something completely different and no matter what perspective is used this is beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I see how this poem could be interpreted to be a metaphorical poem, however I don't really think it is. I think it's rather simple and stunning in that way that it can be personified as well as a simple nature poem, too.

    I envision just the slightest bit of a reflection of the moon as it is starting to rise into the sky at night. It moves slowly, like it is "shy" and then as it rises during the hours of the night, it builds "confidence" and rises above the water and it has a more clear and bright reflection in the sea.

    Beautiful!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A lot of emotions in a few lines. Enjoyed reading