cool and grusome a good combination my friend!

Great poem Sean. I also liked how even though it was unstruvtured, every few lines rhyme.
Aken Sol

Great Poem

Got to second Aken Sol's comments. Very enjoyable, and I think one of the great things was the title. I'm always fumbling around for even a decent title, let alone a good one. And yours was catchy, especially considering the poem.