I can so relate to this poem and I think many others will too. I think you have worded this so well, and broken the layout up very nicely.

The story is one of hurt and pain, but also survival and truth of how it can be like to grow up. Anf how things can shape and change a person and their life.

I really liked the part here you give an island to the fears you have, very nicely done,

I love this poem!!