by Brittany Klein Apr 11, 2014
category :
Special events /
christmas
4-11-14 |
At the beginning of this poem I thought you were talking about your partner, I really did because it sounds like it in a way, and then it turned out it was your dad, God I was shocked. My parents haven't been drunks at all, I disapprove of it. Back to commenting, the imagery and the flow was flawless! I loved how you talked to the readers and a little bit and it was stunning, the emotions you placed in the poem, blew me away. Sadly this happens to many families in the world more often than nothing . Nice poem and I'm sorry if this happened to you personally but like you wrote he was a fool not to know his own child. 5/5 |
by NoHopeLeft
Awesome... |
I have been a drunk a few times but not a father (I never had children) This made me proud I don't recall spoiling my mothers Christmas with my disease |
This is very touching and the amount of emotion displayed is incredible. Great job |
by Trinity Heart
Beautiful |