Beautiful

This is very touching and the amount of emotion displayed is incredible. Great job

I have been a drunk a few times but not a father (I never had children) This made me proud I don't recall spoiling my mothers Christmas with my disease

Very well written

Awesome...

At the beginning of this poem I thought you were talking about your partner, I really did because it sounds like it in a way, and then it turned out it was your dad, God I was shocked. My parents haven't been drunks at all, I disapprove of it. Back to commenting, the imagery and the flow was flawless! I loved how you talked to the readers and a little bit and it was stunning, the emotions you placed in the poem, blew me away. Sadly this happens to many families in the world more often than nothing . Nice poem and I'm sorry if this happened to you personally but like you wrote he was a fool not to know his own child. 5/5

-Mori