by NightFlyer Apr 12, 2014
category :
Life, society /
other
Rivers flow down towards the bay |
by Em
This is really smooth. The rhythm, rhyme and imagery are perfect though I felt it was cut short as it was really written well |
by Meena Krish
Whatever you pen makes me wish to read more. I like the smoothness and the uninterrupted flow from start to end. Very nice! |
by Ray Blue
Wow, nice imagery. Very wonderful read. Thanks for sharing, 5/5. |
by Everlasting
Ah, I see |