by Maple Tree Apr 15, 2014
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Imprinted markings |
by Beautiful Soul
You do have a beautiful way with nature poems and it's very difficult to write and master haikus. You did a beautiful job here though. This is another one where you wrote the poem on the title and you did well. Terra cotta is great because it is made if I remember right. I think here you are talking about a pot or something to hold something. I did love the last line I think that is by far your best. Though the second line is the object the last line holds it all together. I believe nature does have feelings and here you bring it alive. Beautiful work! |
by Ole Carsten
Lovely |
by DarkLight
You have beauty in haiku...something I love in you... |