by Maple Tree Apr 20, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wandering aimlessly within the night, |
by Everlasting
I also felt the same way as Meena. It's an interesting feeling when I'm taken into the words. I have read this piece for a few times, and I like it each time more. I guess it could be the mystery of where the narrator is at? Or my curiousity is being called out? Though I like that I am given hints. It's during the night. Scary feeling to wander aimlessly during the night. Well done. |
by Meena Krish
I felt lost too when I read this. It gives the feeling that the writer is caught in a web not knowing where she is heading to...well penned. |