Comments : My Angel

  • 10 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another nice poem Theresa!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    The first two lines were good, i loved the rhymes

    "As I sit and wonder about this day.
    I kneel to God and begin to pray."

    but from then on, it was a little bumpy!
    but you got the writing skills in you

  • 10 years ago

    by Gary R Priester

    I enjoyed it and can relate to the feelings.
    Perhaps the critic commenting above needs some age on him to understand.

  • 10 years ago

    by LoneWolf

    This poem is great! I can feel many things from it! Remembering that God always has a plan!

  • 10 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Love how you rhymed great with orchestrate, but I was especially impressed by the last 4 lines and how you split them up. I didn't notice the rhymes in them, but they were there creating smoothness and flow. That's the goal, right? Good write.