Comments : The Heart of my Unending Dark

  • 10 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Breath taking and amazing. Keep it up!

    • 10 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you kindly Kris!

      I hope you're feeling honoured that I incorporated your beautiful username into this poem, I've actually been wanting to do it for a while now and this ended up feeling like the perfect opportunity. =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    I greatly appreciate it. It was unexpected and caught me of guard when I firdt read it. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Darren

    Judges comments

    I am a sucker for a good dark poem, this piece is a monster. This could work as a slam poem or you could picture somebody standing on a soap box in a busy square chanting this piece at the top of his/her voice. It is a little long for most tastes on this site but that shouldn't detract from the detail.
    This has been crafted expertly with so much descriptive narrative that after reading I felt I had read a novella. My favourite stanza is the third from the end. I love how this author has managed to seamlessly integrate another authors user-name into this piece. Expertly written piece.

    • 10 years ago

      by Kakera

      Ahhhhhhh thank you so much for the comment and feedback, and praise! It annoyed me a little bit to see after the site went up again after that down-period that this poem had won the weekly, but not being able to read the judges' comments, since they were never posted.

      Thank you!