by Jack Nightengale Apr 23, 2014
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
So close comes the day in which I seek, |
by Kakera
Oh! I see! That was unexpected, you continue to surprise me my friend. I've had a very rough night that I -might- write about in detail later, so sorry for the late replies in the PMs. |
It fits you. Its a beautiful embolism that represents you well. However, it doesn't finalize you in a whole, just certain aspects. :) Remeber, Ja'aruil cei vo rah suu kara |
You are very welcome Kris. I honestly love everything about this especially how you snuck some Japanese in there. It caught me off guard but I still like it. And remember you are always free to read my poetry :) |
I love this mostly because I am imagining it as I read. :) Still like it though. |
Thank you :) |
by Kakera
I really enjoyed this one! And having my username included like I did to yours is always fun, but I -have- to say that it felt a tad bit out of place with a japanese word in the middle of the stanza, it kind-of broke the flow. I didn't think I'd told you what it means before, but it seems like it! |
I did force it a bit and no you didn't tell me what it meant. I was in japan for four years, so I still remember certain words. :) |