by Smaccams Apr 23, 2014
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Grazed will be |
by BlueJay
I am surprised there are not comments on this piece. You wrote it with an interesting outlook and a unique use of description. The flow seems a little choppy in the final stanza but is otherwise pretty well done. The word choice was interesting and added a sort of... tone to the piece that is more than typical tone or voice -well done. I also enjoyed your style for this write. |